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Friday, December 2, 2011

A Delicious Lens Intro

Just had to share the intro on this yummy lens by new lensmaster theSEOmama

Go read it then tell me your mouth isn't watering and your stomach isn't frantically transmitting "Bake these NOW!" messages to your brain.  Or is it the other way around?  

Oh, who cares.  Just go read this delicious lens intro and mark it as a great example of how not to lose readers in the first 30 seconds of their visit to your lens.  Then, while the oven is preheating, compose a fabulous intro for your next new lens.

2 comments:

  1. Yes, this is a great introduction to a great-sounding cookie recipe, Susan. I also like how the page is nicely focused on cookies.

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  2. Great point about the focus on her topic. It's so easy to stray, especially with such a narrow topic. Thanks for commenting!

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